I was young and dumb and didn’t realise the consequences that they had put in place due to the new world order. The new world order ensured that only ther rich, smart of powerful could have any freedom. But of course I simply couldn’t comprehend with their simple rules. We where extremely weathy before the order which meant we had a very high position . We had a powerful status but along with it was going along with their horrible plans. I had to act out and put my whole family in jeopardy, why would I do that?
Goal- to use the prompt words interestingly
I slowly blinked my lime green eyes open. I felt cold stone on my back, not the silk sheets of my room. Slowly panicked trickled in, I should be in my room, I should of heard my infuriating alam clock by now. I felt an abnormal heat and leaped up. Looked around to see a and immense flame. Abruptly I notice a cloaked man giving me a glare that resembled ice.
‘YOU IGNORED ME, I WARNED YOU, I REMIDED YOU REGULARLY, BUT NO YOU CHOOSE TO FORGET THE PAIN AND HARM THAT THEY CAUSED, NOW YOU SHALL SUFFER!’ He roared.
Goal – To use suspense to slowly draw in my reader
It was my place of refuge. The only place where I had freedom. They accepted me there, I wasn’t a danger to the human kind. I’m not monster. Everyday I sneak of and to enter the small portal. Its paradise. I’m accepted, I’m part of the norm. I can use my so called mutation in peace, I can train and practice and for once I’ve made a friend.
‘You’re with us now,’ they told me and unlike the at home they stayed by my side. They didn’t lock me up and torture me. I was free.
Life was simple, not bland, it was just as is. As a young sproutling life was much more exhilarating and new. As the seasons went by I would try and spot each different type of animals. I remember one summer someone even attached a swing to me. Now to pass the time I try and count my spikes and watch my autumn leaves fall. It’s not as exciting as it used to be, but life goes on. I can tell I’m getting old, now I don’t even curse when a mouse carelessly runs up my roots.
Facts- Recently there have been some major breakthroughs in the meat industry. This is pretty big news as Australia ranks in the top 10 countries that eat the most meat. In labs across Australia, they’ve figured how to make meat without having to harm animals. Basically, they take cells from animal blood and a serum full of nutrients and after a short period of time it should eventually turn into muscle tissue and from there it would turn into meat. But it doesn’t come cheap the first one took 400 000 dollars to make, they say that soon that we’ll be seeing this meat in stores. Although some farmers don’t think its fair to call this meat, meat, as they think it not meat as it doesn’t come directly from meat.
Questions- Who thought of the idea of this type of meat ? Why making meat this way work?
Understanding- I know understand that there is more than one way to make meat and also that there is also vegetarian and vegan options for people who want to eat meat.
Fact; On august 28 1963 martin luther king jr gave a live changing speech about equality and for civil and economic rights for african americans, 100s of thousands of people came to watch this speech. It was life changing and as little as a year later congress Paased the civil rights bill that ended segregartion of couloured americans and banned discrimination in the work place. But devastatingly on April 9 1978 Martin Luther king was shot at a hotel in Tennessee. Currently there is a memorial at that site.
Question;My two questions are , who shot Martin Luther king and why, and what was the name of the hotel he was shot at.
Understanding; I know understand Martin Luther king was a very influential person for his time and that he changed the way African Americans were looked at.
Goal; to include suspense in my text
I was franticly runing through the misty wood, it was near, scared by the knowledge of what it had done painstaikingly I continued. Almost out of know where it’s piercingly shape teeth latched on to my shoulder leaving a crimson red stain. I looked back with a grave look in my eyes. I KNEW it would come back for me. I had to do something, anything. I shouted for help, I wasn’t surprised obviously no one came. I felt gutted there was almost nothing that I could do. I had to run, my shoulder ached but I went on, I HAD to.
Goal- To draw my readers in from the start.
As I nonchalantly frolicked about in the warm, inviting spring sun of the evergreen forest I notest something totally abnormal roming the forest. It was what appeared to be a giant, but what truly puzzled me was the fact that it was so immensely large its upper body seemed to disappear in mid air. It seemed to be made of some kind of copper yet to rust. I was in awe how could something of this scale exist! It was so breathtaking I didn’t notice piercing thumps coming from it. All of the sudden I realised it was heading straight for me.
One of the most profound stereotypes of Vikings is their extravagant horned hats. Yet this is NOT true, the horns got introduced in the 1800’s by theatre costume designer called Carl Emil Doepler.
The second fact is that Vikings took immaculate care of their appearance and and it was more than common to always have tweezers, combs and weird tiny spoons to scoop out earwax on hand.
The final fact which lives up to its stereotype is that they are VERY good sailors and can almost flawlessly navigate the sea. This allowed them to form colonies across the globe.
Where did the myth about Vikings having pet dragons come from as it seems quite unrealistic?
Did Vikings ever ever come across Australia and if so did they ever settle here?
I know understand that Vikings have MANY untrue stereotypes that are far from realistic. I know know what Viking are really like and their many interesting facts (like priding their appearance!).
I was on sinking ship in the middle of the Pacific Ocean with no way to contact help.And Although I would love to say there was some miracle and out of no where a helicopter spotted us, that was NOT the case . I was the lone survivor of V.S Stirling, though there was a rescue boat I was the only one to swim to it in time . The rest of my crew drowned and although they were quick, they were still not making enough progress . These few moment have haunt me to this day and it still gives me chills writing this to you know.
GOAL: to be as descriptive as