Goal- to use the prompt in new and interesting way
I was always know as a curious and tenacious kid. Some times for better and sometimes for worse. I was always exploring and wandering the evergreen forest behind my house. Usually the most exiting I would see would be a fox. But today was not the usual. I saw some kind of ship, it look futuristic and not like anything I had seen before. It was made out of some white substance almost like glass. Many questions flooded my head, where was it from, who made it, when did it arrive on earth. It was in awe, what was this?
Goal; to include suspense in my text
I was franticly runing through the misty wood, it was near, scared by the knowledge of what it had done painstaikingly I continued. Almost out of know where it’s piercingly shape teeth latched on to my shoulder leaving a crimson red stain. I looked back with a grave look in my eyes. I KNEW it would come back for me. I had to do something, anything. I shouted for help, I wasn’t surprised obviously no one came. I felt gutted there was almost nothing that I could do. I had to run, my shoulder ached but I went on, I HAD to.
Goal- To draw my readers in from the start.
As I nonchalantly frolicked about in the warm, inviting spring sun of the evergreen forest I notest something totally abnormal roming the forest. It was what appeared to be a giant, but what truly puzzled me was the fact that it was so immensely large its upper body seemed to disappear in mid air. It seemed to be made of some kind of copper yet to rust. I was in awe how could something of this scale exist! It was so breathtaking I didn’t notice piercing thumps coming from it. All of the sudden I realised it was heading straight for me.
I was on sinking ship in the middle of the Pacific Ocean with no way to contact help.And Although I would love to say there was some miracle and out of no where a helicopter spotted us, that was NOT the case . I was the lone survivor of V.S Stirling, though there was a rescue boat I was the only one to swim to it in time . The rest of my crew drowned and although they were quick, they were still not making enough progress . These few moment have haunt me to this day and it still gives me chills writing this to you know.
GOAL: to be as descriptive as
Goal- to use descriptive words
I agent Hannah wells was the best FBI agent there was, all of my cases were solved in the first 2 months and I always got the culprit in jail, yet this case was different . I was trying to figure out who’d killed some girl who’d been missing for 20 years. I’d been on this case for 5 months now hadn’t found a single lead until yesterday. I was exploring this victims bedroom and all of the sudden I looked up to see a girl suspended in mid air above me, I blinked and who ever I saw was gone, but how did she get up there?
Unlike most cups this one did not hold pitiful liquid, for this cup held secrets dark secrets, sacred secrets know one could ever know. Yet it didn’t just hold secrets it held memories, precious memories of joy and sorrow from far and wide. As it drifted from place to place enlightening all who came in contact with its memories and secrets, leaving all who bearded the cups wisdom wise. You may not ever see value in a mere teacup, and you may not ever need to, for the cup is long gone and only remains in the memory and myth.
Goal: Really include the prompt in my piece.
I went to school, tired and lethargic, to notice the teachers and staff all sitting patiently at the desks. Miss Brown my teacher, waved to me and greeted me, “Morning…. well aren’t you going to do the role?” Uhh yes, or gestured to the my desk and hesitantly started to call out my students names. After role there was an arkward silence, what was I suppose to teach. “Miss what are you gonna teach us,” said one. “Uh about that- um, er, you can read, yeah read,”
DING DA DING DIND DA DING
Wait thank god it was a dream, but what if I was in charge?
Hello This is you president I am here to tell you about breaking news, recently all round Australia random stick like figures have been popping up, we are not sure who they are or what any of them what. There are 14 of them each in different states. They seem to be made out of oak wood twigs and are all between 1 -2 metres tall. So far it’s safe to say stay in your home until we have further notice.
Thank you all , this is your president Alexia kyriacou reporting live from Canberra.
In the cork scramble we were moving very fast when we where trying to get all the corks it was exhilarating and by far the most fun event I participated in. We are currently not sure what we placed as they have not been revealed yet. Because I was sick on the day that was one of the few events I participated in. When I got chosen by the Lawson captains to participated in it I was super happy. I think this was a great last swimming carnival (because I’m in year six) and will miss coming to all of them.
Red Before Clock Cycled
Before the death I had never seen the color red, in the society color is forbidden it is deemed unnecessary and useless . As I cycled home I noticed something unfamiliar on the side of the road, a motionless body, I noticed how the white tunic he was wearing was stained red, at the time I didn’t even know such a color existed and was shocked life in the society is supposed to be perfect. I looked at the clock on my bike curfew was almost up. I had to leave. But who was the body!