I was young and dumb and didn’t realise the consequences that they had put in place due to the new world order. The new world order ensured that only ther rich, smart of powerful could have any freedom. But of course I simply couldn’t comprehend with their simple rules. We where extremely weathy before the order which meant we had a very high position . We had a powerful status but along with it was going along with their horrible plans. I had to act out and put my whole family in jeopardy, why would I do that?
Goal- to use the prompt words interestingly
I slowly blinked my lime green eyes open. I felt cold stone on my back, not the silk sheets of my room. Slowly panicked trickled in, I should be in my room, I should of heard my infuriating alam clock by now. I felt an abnormal heat and leaped up. Looked around to see a and immense flame. Abruptly I notice a cloaked man giving me a glare that resembled ice.
‘YOU IGNORED ME, I WARNED YOU, I REMIDED YOU REGULARLY, BUT NO YOU CHOOSE TO FORGET THE PAIN AND HARM THAT THEY CAUSED, NOW YOU SHALL SUFFER!’ He roared.
Goal – To use suspense to slowly draw in my reader
It was my place of refuge. The only place where I had freedom. They accepted me there, I wasn’t a danger to the human kind. I’m not monster. Everyday I sneak of and to enter the small portal. Its paradise. I’m accepted, I’m part of the norm. I can use my so called mutation in peace, I can train and practice and for once I’ve made a friend.
‘You’re with us now,’ they told me and unlike the at home they stayed by my side. They didn’t lock me up and torture me. I was free.
I had just finished school as I casually entered my cramped and bleak flat. I swung my cheap polyester backpack over my shoulders and onto the floor . I strolled in to the kitchen only to see the kitchen window broken and stained with crimson red blood. I gasped trying to suck in air flailing to breath, she couldn’t be dead it might’ve just been, not knowing how to finish that sentence I moved on . Until now life had been just so, as I looked over the edge I saw her laying almost peacefully in a pool of blood.
Fact- 2 families in new south wale wher asked to participate in an experiment, it would test their skills and would prepare them If disaster ever struck. In some situations the kids were smarter than the adults, as they stopped them from making huge mistakes. It could have been because they had more experience or were familar with the fact of a natural disaster from school. In the they both made 2 big mistakes when fire/flood waters , got to either off the family’s homes they tried to hide in a room, which means they can’t see what’s happening in the rest of the house.
Question- Why were the parents so frazzled? Which family prepared the best?
Understanding-I now understand that being in a natural disaster of any kind is much harder than it looks.
Goal- to write from 3rd person
June carefully weaved her way through the busy school halls. “Well, well, well who do we have here, June the hoon!” said Aza.
“I have to get to biology,” June squeaked. Then it was as though time stopped and calm oura entered the room along with a strangely calming ghostlike figure.
‘You, my dear are in need of a wish, you only have one, don’t waste it,’ then in a flash things returned back to normal. She was left staring down Aza.
‘I wish you would just leave me alone!’ It was her wish, however, she couldn’t believe what she had done Aza… was… gone….
FACTS- As humans we depend on water, and for most we don’t think about how much we use. For people in Cape Town (experiencing a seemingly endless drought) water is scarce. They only get 50 litres a day that’s barely enough to get you through the day.
- dishes and laundry, 18 litres a day.
- 90 second shower, 15 litres.
- 1 toilet flush, 9 litres.
- Washing your hands, 3 litres.
- Cooking, 2 litres.
- Drinking water, 2 litres.
- 1 dog bowl, 1 litre.
Thats 50 litres gone and if want to have everyday luxuries like a long shower or even going to the toilet more than once a day you’ll be in a predicament.
QUESTION-Who controls the water? Do certain people- like their Prime minister get more water?
UNDERSTANDINGS -I now understand that we shouldn’t take water for granted. And in some countries they barely have enough water to do what we consider day to day things.
GOAL- to describe well.
As an widely known and established pastry chef, I was know for my extravagant and dramatic cakes. My current master piece was close to finished, I was just putting on final touches and getting it ready to send off. It was an adorable daffodil yellow, and was lightly sprinkled in petite pink sprinkles. It was of huge importance that it was flawless, I was sending it to a prestigious critic and I was sure she would notice the finest of details. But the most vital and consequential step was getting my masterpiece over the large and poorly cared for bridge.
Facts- Africa’s recent cracks suggests alarming news- Africa may be starting to split into two. After heavy rainfall huge cracks appeared, supporting the fact that due to the huge fault line through the middle it may split into two in 50-100 million years. It’s more than 15 meters deep and 15 meters wide. It’s growing at a rate of 2.5 centimetres. Rifts like these are the beginning of continental breakup so this theory is very plausible.
Questions- Are there any rifts like this in Australia? Could Australia break apart?
Understanding- I know understand that continental drift is always happening and that fault lines and tectonic plates are very connected to continental drift.