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100wc ( contents of letter)

100wc ( contents of letter)

I knew this letter was coming, it would determine the fate of my friendship. It was the precious and invaluable results of my high school application. As slowly peeled open the envelope and unfolded the precious  slip of paper, as I read the contents of the letter I was aware of the smile on my face. I had gotten in along with all my other friends, I couldn’t be more happy. It was my dream school, elegant gates, large patches of grass. This was seemingly the best day of my life.

100wc, why would I do that

100wc, why would I do that

I was young and dumb and didn’t realise the consequences that they had put in place due to the new world order.  The new world order ensured that only ther rich, smart of powerful could have any freedom. But of course I simply couldn’t comprehend with their simple rules. We where extremely weathy before the order which meant we had a very high position . We had a powerful status but along with it was going along with  their horrible plans. I had to act out and put my whole family in jeopardy, why would I do that?

My graph

My graph

This lesson was about ‘how big are families in are school’. It was similar to the graph in my book, but the excel version was cleaner and looked more accurate. The data in our class and in our school are very much so connected as our class is a part of the school although it is an estimation.

100WC (prompt words)

100WC (prompt words)

 

Goal- to use the prompt words interestingly

I slowly blinked my lime green eyes open. I felt cold stone  on my back, not the silk sheets of my room. Slowly panicked trickled in, I should be in my room, I should of heard my infuriating alam clock by now. I felt an abnormal heat and leaped up. Looked around to see a and immense flame. Abruptly I notice a cloaked man giving me a glare that resembled ice.

‘YOU IGNORED ME,  I WARNED YOU, I REMIDED YOU REGULARLY, BUT NO YOU CHOOSE TO FORGET THE PAIN AND HARM THAT THEY CAUSED,  NOW YOU SHALL SUFFER!’  He roared.

100wc (picture)

100wc (picture)

Goal – To use suspense to slowly draw in my reader

It was my place of refuge. The only place where I had freedom. They accepted me there, I wasn’t a danger to the human kind.   I’m not monster.  Everyday I sneak of and to enter the small portal. Its paradise. I’m accepted, I’m part of the norm. I can use my so called mutation in peace, I can train and practice and for once I’ve made a friend.

‘You’re with us now,’ they told me and unlike the at home they stayed by my side. They didn’t lock me up and torture me. I was free.


 

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